I’ve re-translated chapters 1 & 2 of Lazy Dungeon Master this week and am considering doing the same for at least up until Kehma ‘acquires’ Meat. I was still very inexperienced when I first started translating LDM and was quite… well, I was simply wrong on a large number of lines with horrible sentence flow on the others. Haha. If you have the time, I highly recommend you go back to those first two chapters! They read a whole lot better now.